John kissed him, hot and hungry. His figers gripped Eliot's cock as frantically pulled him closer and closer.
He could tell Eliot couldn't take much more and let go, leaving him on the very edge with nothing but need.
"Don't come," he spoke into Eliot's mouth. "Not yet. I'll tell you when."
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John kissed him, hot and hungry. His figers gripped Eliot's cock as frantically pulled him closer and closer.
He could tell Eliot couldn't take much more and let go, leaving him on the very edge with nothing but need.
"Don't come," he spoke into Eliot's mouth. "Not yet. I'll tell you when."